Ooop! Not the religious parents…!

Mizu October 17, 2024 7:47 pm

I’m kinda lost on the direction. Plus the emotions are all over the place. There’s no rapport. I just don’t LIKE these characters yet.

Responses
    cubi October 18, 2024 1:42 am

    Exactly. They yell at each other too much sothere's no time to build their characters I'm hoping this new fear/vulnerability revealed at the end of this chapter is a turning point

    Mizu October 18, 2024 3:42 am
    Exactly. They yell at each other too much sothere's no time to build their characters I'm hoping this new fear/vulnerability revealed at the end of this chapter is a turning point cubi

    Right! Give me something to care about, please…