It's meh

Lingz October 14, 2024 3:36 pm

A typical world-revolves-around-MC plot. Author actually created a decent female character BUT all the "antagonists" of the story suck. I get it if bullies are superficial characters, but even MC's rivals are just full of hate for him. It is disappointing how the supposed top contestant of the competition is introduced to be cold and dignified, but does not show any of these traits when confronting mc. Maybe the hate got to his head, but that just further shows that he has no control over his emotions and actions.

The cycle just repeats: antagonists look down on him, mc provokes them, antagonists rage, mc destroys them. For 30 chapters. Personalities of all the antagonists up till then are literally copy pasted, like surely there are more types of people in this world. And MC beats them without breaking a sweat so obviously it gets boring quick.

I will say that I don't mind the writing of MC's companions. Their interactions are wholesome, and at least less superficial than those with the antagonists.

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