In terms of art I cannot complain (tho there WAS some wonkyness at the start, with the pinhead moments). But the writing really seems rushed and like they left out ALOT of info, monologue that intensifies the emotions and so on. Which I know is a common problem with novel-to-comic adaptations. Some things feel almost random and emotions just don't hit as right as they should to match the situation, character reactions, etc.. Some things were completely glossed over too. Like Koo actually bottoming after he saw the MC cry. That should have been made a much bigger deal given he said a few panels before that that he does NOT bottom. Stuff like that could have made a much bigger impact if they had taken the time to convey emotions better in the comic.
The core story is VERY interesting (even without the smut I'd happily read it!) and it is still a good read tho. So I'll be stalking this for any new uploads. But I will definitely check out the novel because i believe that is MUCH better written due to the faults found here in the comic.
In terms of art I cannot complain (tho there WAS some wonkyness at the start, with the pinhead moments). But the writing really seems rushed and like they left out ALOT of info, monologue that intensifies the emotions and so on. Which I know is a common problem with novel-to-comic adaptations.
Some things feel almost random and emotions just don't hit as right as they should to match the situation, character reactions, etc..
Some things were completely glossed over too. Like Koo actually bottoming after he saw the MC cry. That should have been made a much bigger deal given he said a few panels before that that he does NOT bottom.
Stuff like that could have made a much bigger impact if they had taken the time to convey emotions better in the comic.
The core story is VERY interesting (even without the smut I'd happily read it!) and it is still a good read tho. So I'll be stalking this for any new uploads.
But I will definitely check out the novel because i believe that is MUCH better written due to the faults found here in the comic.