First off they brushed off how the other guy S.A. him, that scene had no relevance to the story at all so I have no idea why they added it. It did have potential with the plot but it was too rushed. This needs like 30 more chapters at least to make it flow better. The seme's emotions didn't really make sense either. It wasn't a horrible read but it does need work.
First off they brushed off how the other guy S.A. him, that scene had no relevance to the story at all so I have no idea why they added it. It did have potential with the plot but it was too rushed. This needs like 30 more chapters at least to make it flow better. The seme's emotions didn't really make sense either. It wasn't a horrible read but it does need work.