Childish

Slytherinlarrie October 9, 2024 3:31 am

The writing is childish I’m sorry like why are you telling your family the father is dead then why is the brother telling vice president that mc is dead then why is mc saying he’s married, and why did they make blondie seem hella suspicious in first couples story like why was he constantly there literally any time mc went outside the house

and what the HELL was that workplace rapist and then kidnapper vlogger rapist arc?? Like actually what the hell, and then what was the basis for the couples attractions to each other??? One pair is apparently in love cause of a ONS, the other couple is “oh he was cute oh he’s handsome now, and oh he was a bit persistent appearing here daily” and “he saved me from bullies as a toddler so now I gotta marry him oh oops it’s not him it’s his brother I gotta marry him” HUH, also throwing around them being mafia like it’s just another thing haha

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