Making the plot shorter?

Chubbybunny October 9, 2024 1:07 am

Hmm the storyline feels rushed and it’s not properly showing how cunning Raha is..
















It’s been awhile since i finished the novel but this scene failed to show how smart Raha is and how she literally laid a trap to have the Chamberlain killed cause he was also a creep and thought of Raha as nothing more but someone to satisfy her brother. Also if I remember right the brother walks in while Raha was on her knees from giving a bj

Responses
    abyss October 9, 2024 12:47 pm

    That's why the cream was on her face lol ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶

    Chubbybunny October 10, 2024 3:52 am
    That's why the cream was on her face lol ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶ abyss

    Yes! She did it on purpose cause she knew it would upset her brother. Our girl Raha is always taking jabs at him

    Meh October 11, 2024 3:23 pm

    Where’s the novel? Do you have a link?!

    Shameless October 12, 2024 3:07 am

    Ok, see that makes so much sense why the brother made ML crawl on his knees and get them bruised tf up. We missing the layers to this shit.

    Chubbybunny October 12, 2024 9:16 pm
    Where’s the novel? Do you have a link?! Meh

    Unfortunately the site I read it on doesn’t have it anymore

    Chubbybunny October 12, 2024 9:22 pm
    Ok, see that makes so much sense why the brother made ML crawl on his knees and get them bruised tf up. We missing the layers to this shit. Shameless

    Yes exactly! All of the slaves die within days so imagine the bros surprised when not only does someone actually survive but he’s taking Raha to pound town daily(≧∀≦)

    Sumizuki October 14, 2024 3:16 am

    Oh wow the manhwa realky skipped on the good parts