bro what even is this 💀 It's so jumpy one second they met, next they're in love. Then t...

Chocopops October 8, 2024 10:59 pm

bro what even is this It's so jumpy one second they met, next they're in love. Then they're in highschool then they met 4 years later? And Literally the very next scene It's 8 more years later???? Like okay time jumps are completely fine but whatever the fuck is written here is not they dont even bother to hint before it happens you just gotta figure it out after multiple scenes It's so bad. I'm guessing it should be based on a novel considering all the skipping? If not then the author really hates this story abd just wanted to get it over with lmao

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