read for the ML

Dummy October 8, 2024 9:05 am

yes hes my type and what can I say. But MC is not that bright. I think if I woke up from a coma where my guard feels very guilty about the circumstances behind the cause of the coma,, I think I’d like to investigate bc it seems like a murder attempt?

It’s a simple story but I wish it was fleshed out! Like why did the prince fall for her? And drum roll the major plot hole of all. This story takes place about the same time or before the events of the main story so why would og!FL would kill her friend. T he only explanation I see from this that her friend was just that bad of a writer.

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