I think this one isn’t gonna be fairly rated.. the story was original even tho it’s a cliche beginning, the characters stand out but I don’t think it’s anything too special either. The development on the story and character was very poor, the only thing that is game changing is the new kind of trait it introduced and it might become the next popular thing in omegaverse as someone said.. but I still think it could have been better, it feels rushed and is confusing, especially on Ryu’s end, even if I understand the point of him not being honest and keeping us from finding out too soon that it’s in fact mutual love idk.. it’s not really coherent with his sudden mood swing. A moment he’s frail and vulnerable, another he’s someone who beat 3 guys and is an idgaf about you.. I think we could use a chapter from his pov, it would benefit greatly to their characters deepness and tying everything together. Also agree with some of the comment, it would have been more interesting to call it mutual attraction rather than love
I think this one isn’t gonna be fairly rated.. the story was original even tho it’s a cliche beginning, the characters stand out but I don’t think it’s anything too special either. The development on the story and character was very poor, the only thing that is game changing is the new kind of trait it introduced and it might become the next popular thing in omegaverse as someone said.. but I still think it could have been better, it feels rushed and is confusing, especially on Ryu’s end, even if I understand the point of him not being honest and keeping us from finding out too soon that it’s in fact mutual love idk.. it’s not really coherent with his sudden mood swing. A moment he’s frail and vulnerable, another he’s someone who beat 3 guys and is an idgaf about you.. I think we could use a chapter from his pov, it would benefit greatly to their characters deepness and tying everything together. Also agree with some of the comment, it would have been more interesting to call it mutual attraction rather than love