Thoughts?

QueenofPeas March 31, 2017 8:53 pm

Anyone else kinda disappointed with this chapter in terms of how easily Shell turned back to his normal self? I feel like the last chapter really dramatized how drastic the pill's effect is and then a second later everything was saved by the predicted almighty hero. (Doesn't mean Im not happy that Shell's alive though)

Responses
    Taphel March 31, 2017 9:15 pm

    I agree, we didn't even get to properly see him get saved. I love it when characters go mad :(

    *:★ℂhiari:♔:ℛin★:* March 31, 2017 9:21 pm

    I curious too, how did he get back up so fast? Eric haven't do anything yet.
    (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜

    shybabyxoxo March 31, 2017 9:22 pm
    I agree, we didn't even get to properly see him get saved. I love it when characters go mad :( Taphel

    Yeah

    Aroob March 31, 2017 9:29 pm

    come on forget it at least all wells that ends well ...i thought he was going to die in pieces ╥﹏╥ i m happy now so you should be happy too(≧∀≦)

    Anonymous March 31, 2017 9:40 pm
    I curious too, how did he get back up so fast? Eric haven't do anything yet. (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜 *:★ℂhiari:♔:ℛin★:*

    Eric released his pheromones which are a cure. Jack even said you have complete control of your pheromones now when he was curing Shell

    Fujoshi_Deep March 31, 2017 9:41 pm

    Thank goodness nothing too serious happened , but yea . I wish it would've been a little more detailed and drawn out for more effect . BUT , im still happy things are setting for them . they deserve to be happy !!!
    I just hope there are no bad after effects thatll happen ┗( T﹏T )┛

    Joy Dancer March 31, 2017 9:47 pm
    come on forget it at least all wells that ends well ...i thought he was going to die in pieces ╥﹏╥ i m happy now so you should be happy too(≧∀≦) Aroob

    I was really happy it went this way, too. <3

    Anonymous April 1, 2017 3:59 am
    I agree, we didn't even get to properly see him get saved. I love it when characters go mad :( Taphel

    Eric used his pheromones to overpower the red death. You see Eric/Shell surrounded by a blue smoke (his pheromones) and even Jack realizes partway through his gloat that Shell was toast that all of the red death had been counteracted. And he even said that Eric had finally learned to control his pheromones

    Taphel April 1, 2017 9:14 am

    No, I understand completely how/why it happens (that's easy ^^) , that's not really what I have a problem with, and its not a huge problem either. I'm not talking about the story, I'm critiquing the way it was presented to us.
    I just wish we actually saw through someone closer to the action's POV. Eric's POV when he unlocked control. Shell's when it stopped. I don't mind but it just felt a bit detached and 'well ok then' with Jack catching glimpses for us.
    Like from Shell's perspective we could of see the hallucinations then felt warm arms around us, and then felt the phenomes. And he could of described it better for us, how it felt etc.
    Jack being defeated was the finale and focus of that moment, helping Shell was just put on the backburner. This does work and Ican see why the creator chose to do it this way. But it's just not what I would of personally gone for, I think that it kind of deserved more attention and detail than it got.
    But like I said, it's not that big a problem, the story still works fine, it's just my personal opinion.

    Aroob April 1, 2017 6:20 pm
    I was really happy it went this way, too. <3 Joy Dancer

    same here dear (≧∀≦) i felt so blessed(≧∀≦)

    Aroob April 1, 2017 6:21 pm
    same here dear (≧∀≦) i felt so blessed(≧∀≦) Aroob

    soo