Ok. It's an interesting story, but it's got some major nopes. Starting with the names, why...

Riholu October 2, 2024 7:32 pm

Ok.
It's an interesting story, but it's got some major nopes.
Starting with the names, why are most Baskervilles named after dogs? I understand being "hounds", that's not original, but did they have to use literal species to name their characters? Took me a while to get used to it. Kinda makes it easier for me to associate the names to the characters, but that doesn't make it less confusing.
The collar with the chain. I get the meaning behind it. I get that's a gift from your most potential wife. But idk...
On the wife topic... Why the harem... Is there even a woman he met that hasn't fallen for him? Eh, probably Cindywindy, she looks like she still got her head on the shoulders.

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    Erys October 7, 2024 2:28 am

    That’s because she’s not supposed to be a potential wife and to be realistic this better not have a harem. I’m OK with him having a lot of girls that pine for him at one point but it needs to stop like I don’t like it. There’s only two potential options that he could end up with and I still don’t like the second option and I don’t think that’s even the best choice for her future so there’s only one option and she’s not there right now and she does not use magic either so, clearly the barbarian girl I think she’s the best choice to be realistic

    Riholu October 7, 2024 8:38 am
    That’s because she’s not supposed to be a potential wife and to be realistic this better not have a harem. I’m OK with him having a lot of girls that pine for him at one point but it needs to stop like I ... Erys

    Yeah, the barbarian girl is the only one currently that makes sense, as they actually had some chemistry going and were together for a long time, while redhead forced the fiancee talk on him and never saw each other much after.

    Erys October 10, 2024 11:58 am
    Yeah, the barbarian girl is the only one currently that makes sense, as they actually had some chemistry going and were together for a long time, while redhead forced the fiancee talk on him and never saw each ... Riholu

    Yeah, and it’s not just the chemistry. It’s the fact that he liked living there. That place is his life as being part of his life suits him. He doesn’t overshadow him clearly there is some issues but like what can you expect? They’re both not exactly good people if you think about their past, as well as tradition whatever but like he was at ease there he saw them as his family as potential to have to be happy to become to find his goals way that didn’t feel like overly putting pressure on him so I very very much enjoyed him there