WTF

mangako October 2, 2024 12:18 pm

Didn't understand shit; how much of the convo was uke's imagination? Like did he actually ask, did he actually scream? If seme actually answered and uke started crying afterwards, wtf was the reaction of seme? "Today take a stoll on you, are you spacing out on me again?" Bitch he started crying right after your response, like wtf was that dialogue? I feel like author is not really good at writing real convos and interactions, because if it were written more realistically, after everything that happened and especially after seme's response (if it was not in uke's delulu mind) uke would never cry in seme's arms like that. Especially not after gathering the courage to ask that question. I feel like at this point, characters are really unstable, and both of them do a lot of weird out-of-character shit that makes the reading experience less enjoyable

Responses
    Adekan October 2, 2024 1:43 pm

    Oh, now that you mention it. I thought the imagination started when he shouted.