Another fapbait unfinished shit

Master Of Unpopular Opinions October 1, 2024 11:42 am

And thanks for not finishing it.
I almost dropped at ch 1, and should have.

Starts with a sex scene.
Useless as always.
The sex scene appear to be a rape.
Yay.
Falls in love with his rapist then rapes him too.
Omg.

The plot could have been good but it ended up being nothing but unpleasant series of situations.
You can't get attached to any side characters because they re just passing by.

Showing how shit was handled at the appearance of mmorpgs in real world could have been a good idea, but the author just ignored all the codes of the genre so in the end, it was just monsters crawling out of random ass mysterious pop-up holes vs military, oh wait, this was tagged yaoi, lets make them non-con fuck for 3 chapters, end.

Edit
I just read the author is deceased. Well... Rip dugo, i wish you'd have found your calling when you were alive, writing was definitely not it.

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