UNWIPED ASS!!

Lole September 29, 2024 6:56 am

Stories are like combs of honey, layered structure and intricacies make plot and characters more cohesive and sweet to eat.. (or whatever taste you like) but this feels like unwiped ASS! and I know we are 11 chapters in but like what the fuck!?

Nothing about this feels natural or the plot makes a WHOLE lot of sense, also hate hate HATEEEE plots that do the whole "I am straight but that made me gay!" Like imagine a lesbian gets turned straight like that?? Or a gay man by a woman?? Author would have been cancelled agessss ago!

Huuu.. well the chapters are still in progress let's see, personally have 0 hope for this though

Responses
    canonMT September 29, 2024 6:52 pm

    ahaha that's funny, but also this manga doesn't seem like it's trying to change the social structure of the world through outstanding storytelling so maybe take it easy for a bit. Just enjoy the art man

    Lole September 29, 2024 8:54 pm
    ahaha that's funny, but also this manga doesn't seem like it's trying to change the social structure of the world through outstanding storytelling so maybe take it easy for a bit. Just enjoy the art man canonMT

    Lmaoo did we read the same thing? Am I missing something? What social structure? Also nahhh the art's not bad but it's meh I would rather stare at heaven's official blessing if I wanna admire art (mxtx's works are worth 100 carat diamonds honestly) then again you are right ha.. need to let this manhwa sit, it'll marinate or rot with time

    canonMT September 30, 2024 1:20 am

    This one :

    "Nothing about this feels natural or the plot makes a WHOLE lot of sense, also hate hate HATEEEE plots that do the whole "I am straight but that made me gay!" Like imagine a lesbian gets turned straight like that?? Or a gay man by a woman?? Author would have been cancelled agessss ago!"

    You're basically saying the author brought up a sexist trope that is completely untrue, but is trying to make it seem true, you even mentioned they'd get cancelled. That's included in a social structure.

    Also yeah, maybe let it sit lol

    Lole September 30, 2024 10:08 am
    This one :"Nothing about this feels natural or the plot makes a WHOLE lot of sense, also hate hate HATEEEE plots that do the whole "I am straight but that made me gay!" Like imagine a lesbian gets turned strai... canonMT

    Sexist and sexuality are different things though? Chapter 8 literally has "I can't believe how turned on I am by a guy. This feels even better than being jacked off by a girl. For some reason I can't push him away" now not saying people don't realize their sexuality through sex, but mean that's it, that's what made him gay, sex and jacking off felt better

    Lole September 30, 2024 10:35 am
    This one :"Nothing about this feels natural or the plot makes a WHOLE lot of sense, also hate hate HATEEEE plots that do the whole "I am straight but that made me gay!" Like imagine a lesbian gets turned strai... canonMT

    It's not sexist as much as this magical change of sexuality with said sexual intimacy. and I personally am fed up with this trope being such a common use, like as a gay man it feels so weird, do they think sex is the only thing that makes us gay?

    And I don't know what you mean "not true" yea I am not calling them sexist as much as I'm calling their take on homosexuality as a homosexual man fucking bullshit. And where is the relevancy of social structure in this Convo? And I mean this nicely but what exactly is your point here cause I'm a bit confused? I feel like you are completely misunderstanding my take here.
    Adiditionally the consent in this handjob is also outright dubious or nonconsensual. White haired dude lifts off his shirt, plays with his nipples like it's free real estate then zips open his pant like

    Like my god! Dude's literally forcing himself on the other guy and yet the one being SA'd goes "ah.. so weird.. a man's making me feel this way" proceeds to sex. I know it's fictional that has dubious consent and even outright SA which is normal in "yaoi" but damn it's still based off of gays. I don't mean to fight with you haha, and I hope I don't come off rude, I think there's been some miscommunication, I no I don't wanna cancel the author (then 90% bl authors would Thanos snap, I'm looking at u jinx) but instead calling out a bigotry plot here

    canonMT September 30, 2024 12:04 pm
    It's not sexist as much as this magical change of sexuality with said sexual intimacy. and I personally am fed up with this trope being such a common use, like as a gay man it feels so weird, do they think sex ... Lole

    I seem to have struck a nerve, my bad bro I didn't mean to. Take a chill pill and relax, peace

    Lole September 30, 2024 12:25 pm
    I seem to have struck a nerve, my bad bro I didn't mean to. Take a chill pill and relax, peace canonMT

    Lol you didn't I am just fluent in yapanese, thanks for the discussion tho have a good day (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ

    Satantamere October 12, 2024 12:02 pm
    Lol you didn't I am just fluent in yapanese, thanks for the discussion tho have a good day (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ Lole

    I love when ppl are intelligent and kind enough to act like adults and say " we agree to disagree" or just "oh it was a misunderstanding no problem" or "sorry I was on edge It's my bad"
    It's too often that ppl start hating each other through comment over a random yaoi...

    I love u both ty