He is going to play them both like a fiddle

Beaniebby September 27, 2024 11:13 pm

I kinda wish the plot would speed up a bit. It's like we are getting all these chapters but it feels stagnant no progression. All this dialogue and I honestly feel nothing. But I get It I guess it has to build up for a dramatic effect. And the author is trying to make it realistic. Maybe I'm just to impatient which is another reason y I don't like slow burns. It always feels like a lot of nothing is happening leaving me feeling unsatisfied after each chapter and I feel like I wasted time. Like those shows where they be on the same episode for 3 weeks and no progression. Every week your like okay we're moving on but no you tuned in and they're in the same scene with the same clothes talking about the same thing dragging it out. I can say so far the story going as I predicted I knew the other girl wasn't going to give him up. & Neither is the FL. I have a couple theories. Also No hate to the author this wasn't to bash the author this is just something I feel while reading. Take it as grain of salt.

S/N: I really want to know the ending and I want to stick around to see her finally be free of him and things that bound her but when it's to slow I get bored. At this rate we might hit season 2 and no progression.

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