I mean generally yeah but the jokes are just... so badly done... look, as a certified bl reader I've read so much worse and had no problem with it whatsoever but this shit is just... pure trash. I aint expecting new york bestseller type shh and if I drop this its probably cus I lost interest rather than getting disgusted but I don't get why people can't criticize this? Like just cus u write something " for the fun of it " doesn't mean you're immune to criticism. Especially when the jokes contain SA and incest.
the criticisms here often make the assumption that the author WANTS to make a good plot but fails at doing so. it's like criticizing a stepmom porn vid for its shitty script under the assumption that the producers and actors wanted to be recognized for their stellar acting and directing. like.... duh? it's porn. it's the point. it's meant to be bad and vulgar and brainless. a major part of critique for any form of media is the author's intention and how well it's executed. so when the flaws you want to criticize are exactly what the author wants to achieve, then you're basically just telling the author they did a great job. if they want to create a wholesome love triangle wherein the mc genuinely struggles with his perceived femininity and unwanted male attention, then we can go alllll day about how they failed at that due to the unserious tone, excess sexualization, unconvincing character building, etc. but the author doesn't want to do that. they want camp, shock value, vulgarity. SA and incest are par for the course. it's meant to be pure trash. congratulations you might as well send the author a fruit basket.
Bro that's literally what my comment is about? Jokes are not immune to criticism. Also if you go way back into the comments you'd see alot of criticism and such. People are just saying "dropped" and leaving atp cus they don't see this getting any better or going anywhere and not everyone are into this.
also yall coming in here expecting grammy winning plot and character writing even after reading this far is crazy. it's obvious from the jump that the author just wants to write crack and situational humor lmao