So, im on chapter 11. I love the art and the premise but... Man oh man it went from 0 to 1...

Kirrica September 27, 2024 7:51 pm

So, im on chapter 11. I love the art and the premise but... Man oh man it went from 0 to 100 fast. So much backstory, ivory towers, chalises, side characters, theories, inner monologues, i can barely keep up, i need some flow to the story. Will the story telling calm down a bit? Hit some breaks? I'd love to continue to read it, it's intriguing.

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    ten September 28, 2024 8:20 am

    yeah, it’s almost like the story has no filler chapters lmao

    Kirrica September 28, 2024 12:59 pm
    yeah, it’s almost like the story has no filler chapters lmao ten

    Not so as filler chapters, but it has been all over the place. Better word is: a lot of exposition.