Liked this story a lot but it felt like there were chapters or pages missing.

Ryushen (Midori) liker September 26, 2024 6:52 am

Like the sudden jump from talking to the shop owner to detaining nine, when did she get there??? There was another part around when they were planning the final battle where there was a brief flashback of when I think ms nat showed elli the orb thing before and while it wasn’t necessary to understand what the orb was, it makes the fact there was a flashback not make sense because it’s showing a scene we have never seen before

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