Wtf

LaLaLaLa September 24, 2024 12:58 am

This was so odd, it felt like two people were writing this manhwa, and fighting eachother for a direction
I stopped reading after the tournament thing cause it was just pissing me off tbh. How are you gonna fight to keep your kid and not raise the child? Not even have him refer to you as 'dad' when it's just the two of you?
Is this the same person who was beating people up day and night to keep the kid..?
( The kid refers to the ML as father inside his head, so why can't he do the same for me? )
I don't understand why mc even wants to be head demon clan? He's not particularly attached to the place, he didn't grow up there, there's nothing that makes the title particularly appealing. ML is leader, and doesn't do Jack shit so it doesn't feel very significant.
I'd much rather see him make his own clan, and become a master himself. Or just go back to how he lost all his martial arts after giving birth( and got them back so easily, really dumb imo ) and see how he gets them back on his own and how he struggles with not having them. There's like all fake ass tension and stakes in this manhwa. They're always backtracking, switching up, or forgetting the plot. This was ass omg .
Feels like the first draft of a habitual pantser.

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    LaLaLaLa September 24, 2024 1:15 am

    Am I missing something? Why is mc not the ruler of the demon clan omg