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I think that what was missing was the romantic chemistry or the "love rivals" in 3p everyone likes everyone and these 2 don't seem to have romantic and sexual interest in each other (maybe there will eventually be???) idk
Ok now hear me out, I feel like there was a little something missing that I can't quite call out but it was still a good read! I loved that the author made it a 3p instead of making him choose one of them. Honestly both seme's where getting a little side eye from me BUT they both really came to care about Satoshi which was sweet. I enjoyed it!