Don't get me wrong it's way better than the basic common drivel we get from the omega Verse genre with lots of you know rape at least the alpha was a green flag and all.
one of the reasons is the ending I found it funny he wanted to get married, and he was mad he had to wait till he was 18, but as alpha, he got to make a permanent decision for the rest of leos life by placing a permanent scar on him? marking should happen till after they were 18 he should have waited a couple years after he built faith with the uke to show through his actions and through time that he was going to be there for him.
that they didn't have to be MATES for that to happen and I was disappointed that he just said a speech of words and Leo fell for it. I kind of felt like the Arthur disregarded Leo's past and it could have done been way better and more romantic they could have had sex yes but they didn't need to do the marking . and then leo as afraid when the bite happened honestly, I like it when there's complete trust and love when the marking happens it just irritates me cause I was hoping for something different at least with this.
fated pairs is just the perfect biological pairing and that you just get dopamine just from touching each other, when it should be more of a relationship based on feelings all that extra chemistry stuff should be a bonus.
And ironically I like the alpha better than the Omega in this story the Omega annoyed me with baiting him with sex and I understood his whole situation it's just that he felt very disrespectful, bodering on dub con It doesn't matter what your past is because a lot of people have the same history it matters what you do with it and you can't use us it to excuse your actions
Don't get me wrong it's way better than the basic common drivel we get from the omega Verse genre with lots of you know rape at least the alpha was a green flag and all.
one of the reasons is the ending I found it funny he wanted to get married, and he was mad he had to wait till he was 18, but as alpha, he got to make a permanent decision for the rest of leos life by placing a permanent scar on him? marking should happen till after they were 18 he should have waited a couple years after he built faith with the uke to show through his actions and through time that he was going to be there for him.
that they didn't have to be MATES for that to happen and I was disappointed that he just said a speech of words and Leo fell for it. I kind of felt like the Arthur disregarded Leo's past and it could have done been way better and more romantic they could have had sex yes but they didn't need to do the marking . and then leo as afraid when the bite happened honestly, I like it when there's complete trust and love when the marking happens it just irritates me cause I was hoping for something different at least with this.
fated pairs is just the perfect biological pairing and that you just get dopamine just from touching each other, when it should be more of a relationship based on feelings all
that extra chemistry stuff should be a bonus.
And ironically I like the alpha better than the Omega in this story the Omega annoyed me with baiting him with sex and I understood his whole situation it's just that he felt very disrespectful, bodering on dub con It doesn't matter what your past is because a lot of people have the same history it matters what you do with it and you can't use us it to excuse your actions
sry for the rant