I think it's very well written. I'm here to defend it. I came from another story by the artist wherein it's kinda like this but toned down (Expired First Love). It's another story about a selfish man.
I'm happy with the ending. It's satisfying too! I agree that the seme was really selfish and abusive as hell in the time they were together. I think the ending was a just desserts for him! When seme realized he really did love uke in the end, the uke didn't cave in the end! I think it's the best karma yet! The uke loved the trashy seme. Uke was able to go thru serious lengths for him (even at the risk of his well-being, pride and money). And he can say he did everything without regret because he loved him wholeheartedly. And it was a nice thing he found a good woman to marry, help him with the inn and his mother, and have a cute kid with!
It's even better that the seme didn't get him in the end! So satisfying!
I think it's very well written. I'm here to defend it. I came from another story by the artist wherein it's kinda like this but toned down (Expired First Love). It's another story about a selfish man.
I'm happy with the ending. It's satisfying too! I agree that the seme was really selfish and abusive as hell in the time they were together. I think the ending was a just desserts for him! When seme realized he really did love uke in the end, the uke didn't cave in the end! I think it's the best karma yet! The uke loved the trashy seme. Uke was able to go thru serious lengths for him (even at the risk of his well-being, pride and money). And he can say he did everything without regret because he loved him wholeheartedly. And it was a nice thing he found a good woman to marry, help him with the inn and his mother, and have a cute kid with!
It's even better that the seme didn't get him in the end! So satisfying!