Hey seriously it's not bad, not bad at all! Would i even dare to say it was good???
Look there was character developments, parts of the plot didn't vanish into thin air, there were CONSEQUENCES TO ACTIONS/EVENTS!!! For a BL this MUST be mentioned! Also the police DOES exist and they did their fucking job, and ffs the characters have NORMAL REACTIONS! I'm thinking of the woman who threw her phone at the ghost, the coworker who got absolutely terrified and the nerd neighbour who called the police and ran away while facing the ... Thing.
Not gonna lie, i almost dropped it at chapter 1, i briefly saw some comments trashing it and when i started reading, i was greatly displeased by the chara-design, they just looked like highschool kids and one went and said ''come on, I've been married for 3years" i felt... Ugh, what am i getting into. Still thought that I'd continue a bit though for a horror story, the art was too "cute and clean" and the protagonist looked too young and pretty, while thinking about this one comment " it's not scary at aaaaalllll" EXCUUUUUUSE YOU WHAT THE MOTHERFUCKING HELLLLLLLL WAS THAT! I so wasn't prepared to see the creature!!!
Ah well yes, it's described as a ghost story but their characteristics seems more of a monster's to me, and hey... It was good. In this story's universe where ghosts do exist, the author didn't use it as an excuse to justify any shit like "shut up, it's magic".
I also like the fact that mc did think about what he's done wrong and wasn't just your typical victim so pure and magnificent that never fucked up, the ghosts' actions and appearances didnt just come out of nowhere either, the protagonists have lots of flaws and are working on it.
The only dissatisfaction I have is about that random ass love story, i would have felt it more if they just stayed friends, especially since in the chapter before the last, they mention that AAAAAAAAALL OF THIS happened in just two weeks. Two. Weeks. That... Huh. That's not enough to build a love story, especially since so much happened in this short timeframe.
Hey seriously it's not bad, not bad at all! Would i even dare to say it was good???
Look there was character developments, parts of the plot didn't vanish into thin air, there were CONSEQUENCES TO ACTIONS/EVENTS!!!
For a BL this MUST be mentioned!
Also the police DOES exist and they did their fucking job, and ffs the characters have NORMAL REACTIONS!
I'm thinking of the woman who threw her phone at the ghost, the coworker who got absolutely terrified and the nerd neighbour who called the police and ran away while facing the ... Thing.
Not gonna lie, i almost dropped it at chapter 1, i briefly saw some comments trashing it and when i started reading, i was greatly displeased by the chara-design, they just looked like highschool kids and one went and said ''come on, I've been married for 3years" i felt... Ugh, what am i getting into.
Still thought that I'd continue a bit though for a horror story, the art was too "cute and clean" and the protagonist looked too young and pretty, while thinking about this one comment " it's not scary at aaaaalllll"
EXCUUUUUUSE YOU WHAT THE MOTHERFUCKING HELLLLLLLL WAS THAT!
I so wasn't prepared to see the creature!!!
Ah well yes, it's described as a ghost story but their characteristics seems more of a monster's to me, and hey... It was good. In this story's universe where ghosts do exist, the author didn't use it as an excuse to justify any shit like "shut up, it's magic".
I also like the fact that mc did think about what he's done wrong and wasn't just your typical victim so pure and magnificent that never fucked up, the ghosts' actions and appearances didnt just come out of nowhere either, the protagonists have lots of flaws and are working on it.
The only dissatisfaction I have is about that random ass love story, i would have felt it more if they just stayed friends, especially since in the chapter before the last, they mention that AAAAAAAAALL OF THIS happened in just two weeks. Two. Weeks.
That... Huh. That's not enough to build a love story, especially since so much happened in this short timeframe.