hmm

[黄] ₙ ₑ ₖ ₒ September 21, 2024 9:18 am

i see everyone complaining abt the plot drifting off and i lowkey agree but the side stories are just as enjoyable. Well maybe author is getting sidetracked? So far anya only achieved 2 stella stars and her relationship with desmond is still the same

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    MagicalReader September 30, 2024 11:22 am

    You know I was thinking the side stories help give him more time to think about the main story since it is kind of restricting to be at a pace of two weeks. Still, give the reader something but give him more time.

    MagicalReader September 30, 2024 11:25 am
    You know I was thinking the side stories help give him more time to think about the main story since it is kind of restricting to be at a pace of two weeks. Still, give the reader something but give him more ti... MagicalReader

    If that makes sense.

    rei September 30, 2024 1:37 pm
    You know I was thinking the side stories help give him more time to think about the main story since it is kind of restricting to be at a pace of two weeks. Still, give the reader something but give him more ti... MagicalReader

    i actually like the idea of him taking time to really carefully plan out the story and giving himself enough time to do so, while also giving the readers some bits and pieces to enjoy