ok so (8/10)

Egg September 20, 2024 10:12 pm

short review: liked the story, didn’t like the offhanded omegaverse sexism and the second couple
long review:
ok so i actually really liked this story. wanna give it an 8/10. i will say i skipped all the chapters that had the second pairing (dojun and the doctor) as center focus. i also skipped all the side stories for that same reason and also bc i heard there was weird incest. the doctor is like the most useless character to this story and has weird thoughts and beliefs and is just generally a massive asshole to doyun and dojun. i actually hate him so much and think the story would’ve been better without him. i’ve never seen a doctor so weirdly invasive into their patient’s life and not end up having their license taken away and going to jail.

to be fair i also don’t like dojun either, but it’s mostly that he’s annoying and if the author redeemed him in the side stories then idk and don’t really care.

anyways. loved the story, loved the pairing and the art.

why i knocked it down two points is mostly bc i just don’t like the random weird sexism about alphas and omegas. tbh ig i kinda knew what i was getting into since most omegaverse stories are like this, but it’s still a point i wanna make here. the omegaverse setting handled here just made me feel like they lived in a society that was both modern but had weird 1800’s opinions. like why is it that when doyun’s about to get raped he realizes that he was safe because everyone else was taking care of him and not the bare minimum that alphas should be better? or how his mom tells him the only reason why he wasn’t attacked yet was bc he had a big strong alpha by his side, and not like, yknow, because these alphas should at least have basic decorum and not rape people??? why is it that the omegas in this story have to be the ones constantly told to have to take care of their pheromones or they’ll get attacked? idk it’s really giving “we always tell women to be careful but not that men should be better.”

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