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If these things happened. It'd would've been like the rest of the 100 stories with that plot. I'm actually happy they didn't drag anything. It's its beauty
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If these things happened. It'd would've been like the rest of the 100 stories with that plot. I'm actually happy they didn't drag anything. It's its beauty
This was supposed to be good!!! There were a few things that I didn't like about the story:
1. It was too rushed. Their relationship was immediately there, I was expecting a slow and painful romance (which it is, but from how it was written, it was kind of not). It could've been better if they showed the time when they didn't get to contact each other. It would've been a tear-jerking, painful, and heart-wrenching part of the story. I almost cried at that part!!! But sadly, it was written too fast and it felt like the author was not having it.
2. They could've "fixed" or made some development with their parents. It was the people who shaped who they were as a person and were a driving force of the story. I always wanted to see how Jihyuk would interact with his father, and how he would react if he knew they would be in a relationship with Heechan (spoiler: a big fan of his).
3. Jihyuk's tutor and Heechan's cousin should have more screen time or a bit of story. How did they meet, what is their relationship like or something like that? It should've been included in the side stories.