at this point, Im questioning thr author's brain, not Louie-- This is just bad writing for...

Lucia September 20, 2024 12:24 am

at this point, Im questioning thr author's brain, not Louie-- This is just bad writing for the unfortunate character

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    NightmarishLand September 20, 2024 3:45 am

    What do you expect when her previous work with the same story building made the antagonist a good guy in the end when the same antagonist made the main couple a living hell just cuz he wanted to drag everybody down just to prove a point that he was right? And instead of building that up (character redemption, fixing his issues), that was cramped in like 2 chapters...

    There are BL mangas that are good but expect the majority have shitty writing. This one had a good opportunity wasted on an author who doesn't know how to actually build up complex story and characters.

    Lucia September 20, 2024 7:40 am
    What do you expect when her previous work with the same story building made the antagonist a good guy in the end when the same antagonist made the main couple a living hell just cuz he wanted to drag everybody ... NightmarishLand

    I've got no expectations. I just read.