I honestly feel like I'm enjoying it more because it's not allowing for typical story clichés. Our heroine is standing on business and trying to find the clichés before they interrupt her life.
Idk but I'm really enjoying the pace. It's not too fast or too rushed. I think the pace is just nice
I don't think there's a need to bond with the inn family tho.. not necessary for the plot.
And I think the mc has mentioned in earlier chapters, if it were in the rofan she had read, the mc will do anything big like doing a business, investigate crime etc. but she's not for that kind of story.
Maybe the reason the author did not prolonged the chapters is because there's so much more plot to fit in the story?
No offense tho. I think this is just nice.
No offence taken lol I care little for the inn family, but I do believe that the impact would be more felt had we cared for the child. Like I enjoy the story but it just feels all over the place that a reread is sometimes needed especially with how inconsistent the updates are.
The story is fun as a casual read, but again I think it’ll be much stronger if they allow us to settle on things rather then quickly moving on. For instance the angst would be SO good had we seen the ML Perspective when the FL collapsed. It would also help strengthen the sibling bond since Ngl I don’t really see the connection with the sister and FL even if it’s intentional that the FL struggles cos technically that’s not her sister. It would be interesting tho to explore that aspect, seeing the FL feel conflicted whenever the sister acts so close to her etc etc. either way it’s all personal preference. Potato potato.
Understandable
This webtoon is so entertaining and I’m really intrigued, but then plot is just jumping all over the place.
We don’t get to settle on things for long before it quickly moves on. For instance the MC coughing up blood and fainting, next chapter she’s fine and all healed, then she is sick again and wham all healed.
Another is when they find out the flower helps cure the sickness, any other webtoon that would be at least 3 chapters long, going into explanation and seeing them discover and produce a cure. Here we find out and then next chapter the cure is already made and being distributed.
Heck even the latest few chapter it felt like so much was crammed in; the duke hostility, finding out how infected the north was, distributing the cure, the sick family in the in etc etc like that’s at least 10 chapters worth of content. Like we haven’t emotionally bonded with the inn family, wouldn’t it have been more impactful had the MC and Prince stayed there for the night, or the little girl had helped them out prior?
There’s not a moment to take things in, it feels like we’re rushing the plot yet we’re unable to process any of the information sigh.
Really enjoying this story, but I just wish they would allow us to take things in.