Mid plot

caviardecoy September 19, 2024 3:26 pm

The progression of the story is not good. Sometimes it feels like they skipped chapters.
Also, the reason for the level of mistreatment towards Lenka is ridiculous.
I would appreciate the story more if the author would have put real effort in making Jane's reasons believable.
He always had the option to eliminate the source of all troubles an he chose not to (so far until chapter 97). So he put Lenka trought hell because he chose not to eliminate the his father. That's weak ass plot.
I mean, even when the king was alive he was taking orders from the Duke instead of coming clean with the King to protect the country and Lenka.
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