Wow this story is a complete waist of time and im actually glad that it ended cause i woul...

Orinoko September 18, 2024 8:55 pm

Wow this story is a complete waist of time and im actually glad that it ended cause i wouldnt be able to stand this shit anymore. I have read stories where the cast can be anoying but you could at least find one or two characters that were the saving grace but in this story everyone is anoying especially the MC's.
I really don't know why the FL was so oppsessed with Etrin, there is not a single thing that you could find attractive about him, he is obssessive, possesive, untrusting, neglectfull, abusive, and straingt up lockes the OG FL, and alow
es her to be abused by everyone in his household, and he doesen't do shit, even when the OG Cona lost her baby, he didn't believe her that Rebecca was the one who poisoned her(ok i can excuse that just a tiny little bit because honestlly how many of us would believe that a friend that we knew from childhood would be able to kill my baby, but still he should have investigated everything to make sure that wasn't the truth instead of just believing what everyone else sead to him) im more mad about the fact that he just left her alone in what is probably the worst moment in her life, and then he cries and wonders why the OG Cona left. Again what did the FL see in him, he has the personality of a wetwipe but unlike a wetwipe he is completlly usseless, a harem MC has more charm than this dude, he isn't even handsome so that i could excuse his action by being like "he is handsone so i forgive him" bit they couldn't even manage to get that right, cause every character looks like somone made them with play dough and it started melting.
Now for the FL, she seemed smart and cunning at first and that was great untill you realize just on what she is spending her time on, like girl why waiste your time on a man who you can't event trust to take your side when you need him, and it only took you almost dying to "change" his mind, and i don't like that she disregarded OG Cona's suffering and chased after the man that caused it, it would have been more interesting if the OG Cona came back and is like "hey wtf are you doing with my body, stop that shit now" insead we got the " thank you take care of him" and i was like WTF is wrong with you you have no reason to wish for his happiness especially after everything he has done to you, but i guess they had to add that cause people where wondering where the OG Cona was. Also in the last chaper what the hell did they do to her hair it's so ugly, and when she was going down the aile i find it funny that is seas lovely but her face looks so creppy almost like a stalker watching his victims and i genuenly laughed at that.
The last thing is the plot, cause it's nonexsistent, it feels like nothing has happened during the whole story and it ended just like that. I was thinking that Jay might be the finnal villain, and that after defiating him the FL would be like "see i told you Etrin was better cause look it turns out that Jay is acctually the evil one and was only using OG Cona for her magic, he never loved her like Etrin did" and that would be a desparate attempt to convince the reader that Ertin wasn't so bad after all, but instead we got nothing, i would have rather read the OG Cona's story cause it sounds 1000000× more interesting than this shit that we got. Well im gonna end it here this post is already long enough, so thank you for reading and have a nice day/night byeee (≧∀≦)

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