I mean, ngl

Esther Nox September 18, 2024 5:51 pm

I dont mind having a 2nd couple in a story but at least put them in a side story so we can understand the main story which is about the 1st couple. Like for me, I cant understand two different couples in one plot. The questions like, "Who is the MAIN couple?", "Who are they?", "What do this 2nd couple got to do with the 1 couple?", "What happened to the 1st/2nd couple?", etc.

And the worst part is I have to reread the scenes about main couple part to see where we left off. In short, this makes me confused as hell.

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    Esther Nox September 18, 2024 5:58 pm

    I am not complaining just giving out my opinion (irrelevant or not), bcs I know there are some people who are just like me who has a hard to comprehend this kind of stories...but the story is nice ofc...its nice, its well-written, the art is good, also the translation, but inserting the 2nd couples into the 1st couple's story is big NO for me and its adding the confusion.

    PS: I do not want to start a fight to the author and their fans and the readers, I am just giving out some criticisms about this manhwa to hope that the author could improve, thats all. But for now I will marinate this for a while just in case the later chapters might be insteresting than the early ones.