I think this story has a great concept that was poorly executed. The MC comes off as completely spineless and shows a concerning lack of critical thinking. I also feel like the development of MC’s feelings for the ML are just cheap, like he “fell in love” just bc the sex was good, they didn’t have enough romantic interaction upon that point to make this realistic at all. And the recent switch of MC’s personality since “falling in love” are just ridiculous, can’t buy it at all. This story had great concept and art but for murdered by its poor execution.
I think this story has a great concept that was poorly executed. The MC comes off as completely spineless and shows a concerning lack of critical thinking. I also feel like the development of MC’s feelings for the ML are just cheap, like he “fell in love” just bc the sex was good, they didn’t have enough romantic interaction upon that point to make this realistic at all. And the recent switch of MC’s personality since “falling in love” are just ridiculous, can’t buy it at all. This story had great concept and art but for murdered by its poor execution.