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for me it started good and got a bit lackluster in between but then again it picked up it's pace and was all in all a good journey.
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for me it started good and got a bit lackluster in between but then again it picked up it's pace and was all in all a good journey.
This ended up being really good! Sure, it had it's issues, and the writing could've used some work. But around halfway I think it started to find its stride. And I love the dynamic between Tasara and Nara!