It feels so rushed like they didn’t put much thought or emotion into the story I feel like if they did it would be like 50 chapters longer also the beginning was kind of sketchy like borderline rape I feel like it eases out but it’s still kind of bad like it has a lot of potential but it’s like there stopping it from growing into a good story but just wanting it to be something people read really quickly like a one shot their just leaving way to much out （￣へ￣）
It feels so rushed like they didn’t put much thought or emotion into the story I feel like if they did it would be like 50 chapters longer also the beginning was kind of sketchy like borderline rape I feel like it eases out but it’s still kind of bad like it has a lot of potential but it’s like there stopping it from growing into a good story but just wanting it to be something people read really quickly like a one shot their just leaving way to much out （￣へ￣）