love the artstyleeee tho the story gets a bit too jumbled for me, like it feels like the s...

Zeruuuuu September 16, 2024 2:29 am

love the artstyleeee tho the story gets a bit too jumbled for me, like it feels like the storyline is confused on what the FL's main goal should be. Idk if it's just me but she seems to change from wanting to be lowkey to just using her power's nonchalantly quite frequently.
I actually like her character but the way she's written seems inconsistent ╥﹏╥

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    milkiss33 September 16, 2024 8:52 am

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    Right??? Like its still really good dont get me wrong but the story is just creating different plot branches that dont even have anything to do with each other??? The search for Leanne is just dropped and genre suddenly changed forcing her to be in a love triangle situation. The og renee and leanne’s story was getting so interesting but they had to drop it too #-.-)

    milkiss33 September 16, 2024 8:54 am

    SPOILER:

    Right??? Like its still really good dont get me wrong but the story is just creating different plot branches that dont even have anything to do with each other??? The search for Leanne is just dropped and genre suddenly changed forcing her to be in a love triangle situation. It wouldve been 10/10 if the plot dived more deeper into og renee x leannes backstory as an arc than dropping it and ramming straight to the romance bit(● ̄(エ) ̄●)

    Zeruuuuu September 16, 2024 10:18 am

    TRUEEE. The mystery in looking for leanne is already quite intriguing especially with the church issue. Hope it goes back on track in the next arc ╥﹏╥

    Pooh September 25, 2024 10:16 pm

    Thank you and I thought I was the only one with this unpopular thought… I don’t understand what I am supposed to root for ? I love devil may care characters a lot but she keeps going back and forth Σ(っ°Д °;)っ

    NobodysHere December 29, 2024 12:53 pm

    ahh so thats the reason why i feel so off with the story;; it just goes anywhere and the pacing can get too fast

    she uses her powers alot and tends to use it in minor conveniences, i also agree with her character slightly inconsistent.