The pacing/storytelling is quite, idk, disconnected??? like there are some gaps and idk if...

Green Potato September 15, 2024 7:47 pm

The pacing/storytelling is quite, idk, disconnected??? like there are some gaps and idk if i just missed it or smth cuz like 1) there's no explanation at all how fl and pink haired maid started working together to the point where pink hair secretly delivers messages for her. And whats with that talk about agreement and such? did i accidentally miss a chapter??? Does she even know that pink hair is the previous maid's daughter?

2) the thing with the thorns on her wrist. Fl said it wont activate if she doesnt lie, but when that viscount complained abt her to the queen and fl told her exactly what she did, the next thing we see is her wrist bleeding. The only thing I can think of as an explanation is the queen intentionally activated the curse to scare off the viscount

3) Isnt it weird for the queen to not notice that the guards she set on fire the other day have been somewhat healed? But then again she most def dont give a fck on whatever happens to them

4) i get FL exchanging places with the maid for ONE NIGHT just so she can heal the guards, but right now she's been away for MORE THAN A DAY. She literally went all the way to the north. Wouldnt the queen notice??? Especially since the people in the palace always keep tabs on fl?

Maybe it's just me but I feel like everything is just way too convenient for fl.

Responses
    Green Potato September 15, 2024 7:51 pm

    ALSO, i was expecting an enemies to lovers trope but there's none at all T^T In fact, theres little interaction that I cant sense any romance between the two so i found it weird that suddenly the ml is getting teased abt being protective of fl

    noot noot September 22, 2024 3:22 am

    i agree w