I enjoyed the story but the end seems a bit sped up and for some reason I can't help but f...

alrkitty September 14, 2024 9:49 pm

I enjoyed the story but the end seems a bit sped up and for some reason I can't help but feel the author intended her male friend to have a larger part but changed their mind half way through. He suddenly disappeared we saw him occasionally but I was surprised he was so gung ho to pursue her when he found out but didn't try very hard then he says he'll show her his new and improved self at the wedding but then the author skips it and goes straight to the end. But if I ignore his part that seemed over looked well the authors new manger also seems like she should have had a larger part something seems lacking there and the follow up with the ex seemed fast and not much to it. It's extremely weird I'm actually wanting drama but for some reason I feel like another story was intended but the author changed their mind. Does anyone one else feel like that?

Well regardless I liked the story I'd rate it really high though if I could shake that feeling. Thing is this is my second time reading and I still feel that way. It just feels sped up shame.

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