at first i thought the order of receiving info was a little off, but later now, after reading through it all, i think it was intentional. it gave a sense of vagueness, instability (like their relationship) and you always seem to be on the edge, as if something's going to happen rn and you'd have no idea what it is. i think that's what that point is, how several points were being repeated over and over again, and it was only late in the story that we realised why everything turned out the way it did. by this time we've already familiarised ourselves with the characters, and at this moment, receiving such a tragic background would only make the emotions more intense aaaaaaa i loved how it went :") i just wished that the author would've worked more on the latter part of the story as intricately as they laid out the plot. while the backstory seems tedious, their warming relationship, seemed a little less weighty in front of that. ALSO HOW I WISH WE COULD SEE HOW THE MARKS TURNED OUT TO BE AAAAAAAAAA
at first i thought the order of receiving info was a little off, but later now, after reading through it all, i think it was intentional. it gave a sense of vagueness, instability (like their relationship) and you always seem to be on the edge, as if something's going to happen rn and you'd have no idea what it is. i think that's what that point is, how several points were being repeated over and over again, and it was only late in the story that we realised why everything turned out the way it did. by this time we've already familiarised ourselves with the characters, and at this moment, receiving such a tragic background would only make the emotions more intense aaaaaaa i loved how it went :") i just wished that the author would've worked more on the latter part of the story as intricately as they laid out the plot. while the backstory seems tedious, their warming relationship, seemed a little less weighty in front of that. ALSO HOW I WISH WE COULD SEE HOW THE MARKS TURNED OUT TO BE AAAAAAAAAA