I really like Winter character for now, and I also like Raymon’s competitive and arrogant nature, their dynamic for now is still interesting to looking forward, but at the same time, I have to agree that Raymon is currently is very thoughtless and dumb. I guess he has to be that way for Winter to easily approach him, but if Raymon continues like this, the story might develop in an unpleasant direction, so I hope the author will bring more balance. Hopefully, after Raymon realizes he’s been deceived by Winter, he’ll become more thoughtful and less obvious
But seriously, it’s been a long time since I’ve seen ML with a design that suits my taste so much. Please develop this BL into a interesting story, even if the start is a bit messy but if the main battle of control game between them have good development, I’m satisfied.
I agree winter's design is very attractive. He can pull off puppy and sexy at ease. Author has opportunities on their hands to make this a good story with enough backstory and character development.
He acts smart and intelligent. But he gets into bed with stupid and desperate men. he's lack of self-control makes him pick below average men and tbh he picks ugly men as well. He isn't ugly so I don't know why had one night stand with mobs no wonder he can't remember their faces cause he isn't going for good looking guys with good bodies which ultimately leads him to find their disappointing dicks.
He has the fear of his horny life and professional life overlapping but he still hooked up with the janitor who's from his own company, had one night stand with a guy who works in the same industry as him. He could have easily avoided that situation in chapter 1 by asking,"what do u do?" Before his hook-up . Even in fictional stories there were characters who tell their field of profession without much details. I guess author wanted to show Raymond's lack of patience.
He's truly a reckless stupid guy the reason he fell for winter physically at first cause winter had good figure+ good face. That's why he was bothered when winter first ignored him after their Jod section.
Since the author is hinting at his heart being broken when he was young it might explain why he's emotionally immature and acts so reckless and stupid.
I haven't focused on winter much + have to wait for more chapters to actually observe his personality. He's interesting so far