Both stories felt so random lol. The author put a lot into both couples interacting with each other, but not in a romantic way. So when the I love yous came, it felt random and like “huh? Oh ok ig” The second story was weird cuz he left after they slept together and then the phone call happened and all of a sudden he’s back to the house sleeping with him again. We didn’t even get to see the other guys perspective on anything lol. The first couple could’ve been soo good but it was written rushed. I think both stories could’ve been way better if the author just made them separately, like give both stories 5 chps.
Both stories felt so random lol. The author put a lot into both couples interacting with each other, but not in a romantic way. So when the I love yous came, it felt random and like “huh? Oh ok ig” The second story was weird cuz he left after they slept together and then the phone call happened and all of a sudden he’s back to the house sleeping with him again. We didn’t even get to see the other guys perspective on anything lol. The first couple could’ve been soo good but it was written rushed. I think both stories could’ve been way better if the author just made them separately, like give both stories 5 chps.