It was kinda messy, rushed and lacked some deep, but really sweet and although that last part (the fight when secrets were revelead) annoyed the heck out of me ( I KNOW it was for the plot solely, but that doesn't mean I don't wish they had just talked it out as it was perfectly resonable both their feeling of wanting to run away), I actually really liked it ?? The seme having color blindness and be seen as "defective" was a rlly nice touch in an omegaverse where usually it is expected of alphas to be perfect, but I felt like the uke deserved some more character building - he's sweet and he has suffered and wants to be happy, and that's all we have going ya know... I felt like his memory coming back was a necessity especially if he was to tell his story to others (some angsty scenes of him remembering and then him using the happiness he had with Ren to gain courage and it'd be perfect). The plot is hella good and it could've been better developed, but it was sweet enough, tho I would've liked it more if we had seen them forming a family in the end, as a throwback to the first chapter with the pregnant omega, as well as a bonding scene, but well.... can't have everything!
It was kinda messy, rushed and lacked some deep, but really sweet and although that last part (the fight when secrets were revelead) annoyed the heck out of me ( I KNOW it was for the plot solely, but that doesn't mean I don't wish they had just talked it out as it was perfectly resonable both their feeling of wanting to run away), I actually really liked it ??
The seme having color blindness and be seen as "defective" was a rlly nice touch in an omegaverse where usually it is expected of alphas to be perfect, but I felt like the uke deserved some more character building - he's sweet and he has suffered and wants to be happy, and that's all we have going ya know... I felt like his memory coming back was a necessity especially if he was to tell his story to others (some angsty scenes of him remembering and then him using the happiness he had with Ren to gain courage and it'd be perfect).
The plot is hella good and it could've been better developed, but it was sweet enough, tho I would've liked it more if we had seen them forming a family in the end, as a throwback to the first chapter with the pregnant omega, as well as a bonding scene, but well.... can't have everything!