Does it get better?

Toilet Reaper September 11, 2024 1:57 pm

I'm done. I couldn't read past chapter 10, I've never felt so frustrated. Honestly, the plot is the a least of my concerns. It's the pacing, the fucking pacing. It starts with him pregnant in an unknown place and starved?? Because for some reason the top's housekeeper who is supposed to be loyal to her boss barely feeds him and mistreats him, even though he's pregnant? With her boss's baby?? And the boss whose face he doesn't even know?? For some fucking reason?? And when he finally appears it seems that they have more chemistry than most bl couples even though they haven't even met before and they barely communicate?? He called him beautiful and adorable etc and he just whips out his dick every other minute?? Oh and also in the prologue he seems like a fuckboy and nothing is explained. But I have no more fucking patience. I have so much more to say but my brain is too tired.
Frustrated and confused.
Also, calling someone out like 'Dol-dol's mother!' is officially the cringiest line I've ever read. That shit almost killed me

Responses
    Itzz_A_Trap September 14, 2024 1:31 pm

    Yeah, at first I thought "Aww he's defending him" but then as he kept doing the creepy shit over and over and over again my face went from a smile to mundane and then that fight scene (bro wasn't even being weird about it he was just shooting his shot) where he said "Brain's mother!" was the last straw.
    This is so cringe, I'll ask others if it gets any better but if not, Im dropping Im not reading another shit omegaverse just for a baby
    *COUGH* Love is Illusion *COUGH*