This comic was a roller poster, I did in fact read it in one day lmfao so I can recall this all clearly. Here are my thoughts: Starting off at the beginning. Listen, I love NSFW as much as the next guy but having it in the first chapter, the "first time" the characters meet is a bit insane and forced. The NSFW seemed constant, as soon as we'd get into the lovely angsty plot it'd be interrupted by NSFW, either via flashback or some of the characters deciding "ah, I really want to have sex!!" Lmfao. I'd love this story a LOTT more if it was more story less sex. You might be thinking "well just read a non smut story.." I should be able to enjoy a story with smut without it being CONSTANT lmfao. This felt sort of just like straight up porn. Main character. The Mc was COCK HUNGRRY it seemed to be all he talked about whenever something important to the story wasn't happening. Also the main characters background wasn't explained a loooot but it sort of was. I don't know if I just didn't see it but we never got a mention of Mcs dad, only his mother. The pink hair dude, he was really weird. I liked him a lot until that whole bit where he was sexually assaulting main characters ex. Like who kidnaps a drunk and puts a gag on them Talking about sexual assault!! I feel like a LOT of stories can be AMAZING without sexual assault or rape. It really dulls the story down and makes it not stand out from many stories now a days. The part where the Mcs boyfriends uncle sexually assults Mc I felt was unneeded, I didn't really see a point in that scene though I could be wrong.. I do believe the same effect on the story could have been had without the uncle touching Mc. I'd say this is a middle rating. 3.5/5 maybe even 4/5 because I loveee the art!! I'm not a professional author so I can't really give amazing criticism, but these are just my thoughts reading this comic :D (BTW [spoiler] WHEN MC TURNED INTO THE WHITE WOLF LIKE HIS MOM?? DIDNT EXPECT THAT, I WAS YELLING BRO. THAT WAS HYPE)
This comic was a roller poster, I did in fact read it in one day lmfao so I can recall this all clearly. Here are my thoughts:
Starting off at the beginning. Listen, I love NSFW as much as the next guy but having it in the first chapter, the "first time" the characters meet is a bit insane and forced.
The NSFW seemed constant, as soon as we'd get into the lovely angsty plot it'd be interrupted by NSFW, either via flashback or some of the characters deciding "ah, I really want to have sex!!" Lmfao. I'd love this story a LOTT more if it was more story less sex. You might be thinking "well just read a non smut story.." I should be able to enjoy a story with smut without it being CONSTANT lmfao. This felt sort of just like straight up porn.
Main character. The Mc was COCK HUNGRRY it seemed to be all he talked about whenever something important to the story wasn't happening. Also the main characters background wasn't explained a loooot but it sort of was. I don't know if I just didn't see it but we never got a mention of Mcs dad, only his mother.
The pink hair dude, he was really weird. I liked him a lot until that whole bit where he was sexually assaulting main characters ex. Like who kidnaps a drunk and puts a gag on them
Talking about sexual assault!! I feel like a LOT of stories can be AMAZING without sexual assault or rape. It really dulls the story down and makes it not stand out from many stories now a days. The part where the Mcs boyfriends uncle sexually assults Mc I felt was unneeded, I didn't really see a point in that scene though I could be wrong.. I do believe the same effect on the story could have been had without the uncle touching Mc.
I'd say this is a middle rating. 3.5/5 maybe even 4/5 because I loveee the art!!
I'm not a professional author so I can't really give amazing criticism, but these are just my thoughts reading this comic :D
(BTW [spoiler] WHEN MC TURNED INTO THE WHITE WOLF LIKE HIS MOM?? DIDNT EXPECT THAT, I WAS YELLING BRO. THAT WAS HYPE)