This was confusing. There's plot holes galore, and we get a lot of weird, unexplained time jumps. Don't get me wrong, I did enjoy this. The smut fed my addiction, story was compelling enough to keep me here, and the characters were appealing, BUT there is a lot of room for improvement and growth.
Stray thoughts: I was hoping to see a little more of the bdsm play for sure, it really felt a lot like vanilla with a sprinkle of ds. I know by technicality, this isn't bdsm centric smut, but it was mentioned early on, slightly played on, and damn i wanted more. I'm assuming this is an adaption of some other media, but I'm too lazy to look.
This was confusing. There's plot holes galore, and we get a lot of weird, unexplained time jumps. Don't get me wrong, I did enjoy this. The smut fed my addiction, story was compelling enough to keep me here, and the characters were appealing, BUT there is a lot of room for improvement and growth.
Stray thoughts: I was hoping to see a little more of the bdsm play for sure, it really felt a lot like vanilla with a sprinkle of ds. I know by technicality, this isn't bdsm centric smut, but it was mentioned early on, slightly played on, and damn i wanted more. I'm assuming this is an adaption of some other media, but I'm too lazy to look.