UGH.

Purky September 8, 2024 12:05 am

This is so stupid
Tf you mean you'd save him again???
Is the author insane or something? Even if you're the nicest most Saint-est person on planet earth, you would NOT resave someone who has chained you to a wall, and is walking you out the house on a goddamn leash
Is the author being fr rn

The mc is such a badly written character, its literally just lazy writing imo

No one would act the way the mc is acting, its literally so unrealistic its unbearable to read.
If the mc is doing all this cutesy talk as a strategy to get on heeseo good side and escape then it would've been interesting, but its obvious its not that he is literally Stockholm syndrome-ing himself and its so annoying.

In short, the mc is so goddamn weird. He is so badly written, and its driving me crazy. Why is he so okay with this???
He is so chill abt it too, as if he just gets kidnapped and housebound every Tuesday

Btw; who is this new(?) character? Is that the step-brother? And if it is so why is he acting as if he didnt know the mc in highschool? Im so confused, i thought they knew eachother since they were kids no?

Responses
    ele September 8, 2024 11:39 am

    not all stories are meant to be realistic!!! and mc was obviously going to end up with stockholm syndrome you can’t just blame him for it!!! he isn’t a poorly written character, if anything the author is doing a great job at getting people to see both shitty sides of the characters and mc didn’t know the brother in hs it was after hs that they ended up becoming related.. it wouldn’t hurt to re read the story

    Purky September 9, 2024 12:46 pm
    not all stories are meant to be realistic!!! and mc was obviously going to end up with stockholm syndrome you can’t just blame him for it!!! he isn’t a poorly written character, if anything the author is do... ele

    Well thats whats am saying, the story isnt realistic or human, its just an excuse to be edgy.
    And youre right not all stories are meant to be realistic, but when youre talking about such a heavy subject you need to put in mind that the characters may have heavy reactions (which the author forgot to do) and tbh those "heavy reactions" is what makes a good story.

    And im not blaming him for getting Stockholm syndrome tf did you get that from?
    Re-read my comment, im saying that the mc is badly written bcuz the author isnt giving him a mind and making him okay with all of this just so the plot can continue.
    A good-written character would throw fits and go batshit crazy only to then reach their downward spiral into either insanity or acceptance.
    The mc is already accepting and empathetic with the ml's actions.
    Thats what Stockholm syndrome is, him just being 'that' without the all the before-steps (going batshit crazy - spiraling - ect) is so stupid and badly written.

    the author is refusing to give the mc a proper reaction to all of this, just so they can make it all abt smut and hope that the readers wouldn't notice.
    Tbh he wasn't badly written before getting kidnapped, at first i thought he was an interesting character worth reading. Now he is just a nice sack of potatoes and it sucks that the author went that way.
    Its like they just molded him into what the ml would want (which is again what Stockholm syndrome is)

    And oh jesus i forgot they met when they were teenagers ig i was just hoping it was a cute new ml not just a "step-bro" situation.