It's the second time I read this and I still feel like it could've been done better a lot ...

.T. September 7, 2024 6:07 pm

It's the second time I read this and I still feel like it could've been done better a lot better, plot is intriguing and interesting but execution lacks. One big question is essentially what was the point? In the end nothing was solved when you think about it regarding the solution unless i didnt read well enough and i missed it...

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    shrine September 8, 2024 10:30 am

    I agree. My 2nd time and I can’t believe I considered this a 5.

    At the beginning you’d get a random cut off from what was happening. Went from him being on the balcony and the next clip is him being fucked?? It also took 30+ chapters for him to actually feel something.