oh how i wish most of the readers are just like you.. everyone I've encoutered here just doesn't seem to get this type of stories .. damn like, if the story is not to their taste, write their own..
i understand what you mean
like they immediately think a story is bad because the character isn't green or they're problematic
like, maybe check what the story is about?? to understand why the character is horrible? all you need to do is check what sort of person they're portrayed and their role to make it make sense why they act the way they do (ex. Psycho acting like the psycho he is?)
But I also understand others side, cause some reasonstories like this tends to justify such behaviors as a failing attempt to make their character likeable, when in fact they don't really need to? just accept theyre bad, what they've done is bad, no need for a sob groveling story or some traumatic past
I also see people who's basis of good story is "green flag character" and that's honestly fine since its their own personal basis, i just kinda hope they don't judge others for liking a twisted story with twisted character and act like people who does like it doesn't have any sort of moral like the character themselves, cause i see A LOT of them ffs
Don't blame us if we think trash character ≠ trash story
Characters can be kind and good but even so, writing can be ass or stale regardless of how good the character is
Thank you for this honest comment, so many people go into these things knowing it’s toxic and then act shocked that it’s toxic. It makes it hard to look for genuine discussion about the plot when it’s all the same comments over and over . I also liked that the ML was never redeemed, I feel like that’s such a rarity in these stories. No sob story, no “MC’s parents were abusive that’s why he killed them!!” no he’s just consistently crazy lol
Making sure the MC never uncovered his secret was a nice move, because he gets a “happy ending” living in ignorance, but the author gives him just enough skepticism to make you wonder if shits gonna hit the fan years from now.
Im giving this a four because it stayed true to the story and seme's character,
there's no redemption, no justification why he did what he did, no excuses
he's a psycho and still a psycho at the end of the story, he's consistent and his victim is seen as victim till end, i read this knowing its gonna be fucked up. I don't mind stories like this as long as there's no sob story on the abuser's side and they don't try so hard to justify his actions and just accepts that he's hella bad
basically this story portrayed how this particular psycho achieved his goal
i laughed so bad when he blocked the baby from uke's sight that's peak petty and psychotic
I feel like once the kid is already big enough, he might kick him out like "u old enough, move out" or someday plan how he's gonna murder the baby disguised as accident