This plots really interesting but the pace is moving way too fast tbh, its making it reall...

Oblivionstail September 6, 2024 1:29 am

This plots really interesting but the pace is moving way too fast tbh, its making it really hard to be fully invested or completely understand whats going on. This chapters the best example of this. Honestly I couldnt tell you wtf happened besides he tried to kill the prince again, failed, and the prince for some reason is just continuing with the hunting? Also what happenrd to all the people around them? Did some pages just not load??

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    Charly September 10, 2024 8:17 pm

    Agreed. I checked on multiple sites bc I thought we were missing parts but this story's just paced ridiculously fast.

    its a shame bc the concept is interesting, but things are moving too fast to see the turmoil the other characters are going through and why its important