Like yk how usually shoujos are written by women for women and it's often attractive to read that way? Well this one feels like it's written by a man. I'm not tryna be sexist but it really doesn't give of the vibes of normal shoujos with actual good character or plot.
-MC is supposedly with a greater spirit than she realise that hv great power but she never actually saved herself in any of the troublesome situation she ended up with.
-ML always came to save her as her knight in shining armour like every. Single. Time. Like the only time mc was fucked and this guy didn't save her was the exam and she was flunked bad he feels so 1 Dimensional
-all of the villains who go against mc all are also extremely 1D and then immediately turning over a new leaf and becoming friends with MC after that ( for now except for the villain girl who snatched MC fiancee)
-they're trying so hard to portray MC's fiancee of having a bigger plan and is a mastermind of some sort but it doesn't work lmao. Like nothing in the writing is doing that for him at all
All in all I felt like I wasted my time and I tried so hard trying to like this bc the art's good but I really can't. It feels so much like a simp piece for the greatness of the ML like why
Like yk how usually shoujos are written by women for women and it's often attractive to read that way? Well this one feels like it's written by a man. I'm not tryna be sexist but it really doesn't give of the vibes of normal shoujos with actual good character or plot.
-MC is supposedly with a greater spirit than she realise that hv great power but she never actually saved herself in any of the troublesome situation she ended up with.
-ML always came to save her as her knight in shining armour like every. Single. Time. Like the only time mc was fucked and this guy didn't save her was the exam and she was flunked bad he feels so 1 Dimensional
-all of the villains who go against mc all are also extremely 1D and then immediately turning over a new leaf and becoming friends with MC after that ( for now except for the villain girl who snatched MC fiancee)
-they're trying so hard to portray MC's fiancee of having a bigger plan and is a mastermind of some sort but it doesn't work lmao. Like nothing in the writing is doing that for him at all
All in all I felt like I wasted my time and I tried so hard trying to like this bc the art's good but I really can't. It feels so much like a simp piece for the greatness of the ML like why