Many complaints

Blue_psycho312 September 3, 2024 1:05 pm

I did overall enjoy it, but there were moments when it was hard to enjoy.

There's way too many timeskips, and during those time skips they would include important or pivotal information for the storyline. Like how did Hari and Eungene go from flirting, talking about marriage, FINDING OUT SHES GETTING MARRIED TO JOHAN, him blowing on incense, to Eungene marrying her the next day..??
How are they just gonna bypass that Cabel is married now AFTER ONE (KNOWN) MEETING WITH HIS FUTURE WIFE? I WANTED TO SEE THE DEVELOPMENT.
I also wanted to see Eric and Louise's relationship blossom.
AND JUSTICE FOR JOHAN WTF. He literally took such good care of her, built up this whole thing that he was gonna marry Hari, suddenly Hari is a brother-lover, now he ceases to exist and the only time he showed up again was when they BRIEFLY mention that she's gonna marry Johan.... only for them to do him injustice.... Yikes.

It wasn't a horrible read, but I just wished there wasn't so much plot holes and missing context.
Like they hadn't quite yet convinced me why it's okay for Hari and Eungene to be together... I know they're not even related by even a speck of blood, but it still feel morally wrong, and they didn't really do a good job of convincing us of this icky incestuous feel to their relationship idk..... but they're still cute at the end- AFTER she got her original name back.

Responses
    Jessica_Tavempire November 12, 2024 1:30 pm

    *Spoiler*



    Hello,

    I think that the chapter that mention her wedding with Johan is a flashback to explain the point of view of Eugene on the matter and how Hari came back in time in the first place (because of a esterne charm apparently). And in this flashback Cabel is already married but in the new time line it did not already happened.

    Hope this clears the confusion on de wedding part.